W.A.L.T: I can write a narrative using correct structure
In our Hurumanu, me and my group already started rehearsing for movie. We are still trying to figure out how the movie would go and where were supposed to film it.
Here is how the movie might go:
Rapunzel's going to get kidnapped and Mother Gothel actually care for Rapunzel and not her hair.
If you guys are wondering who's who in the movie, here is the list of the characters:
Me as Mother Gothel
Khlye as the Narrator
Christian as Flynn
JV as a Horse
And Faye as a helper and director.
Monday, 11 March 2019
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Hi Janel,
ReplyDeleteI really loved reading this blog post of yours and would really love to read more. When I was reading it i did seem to find a few mistake's in parts where it didn't make sence for me.
The parts that didn't really make sence was when you wrote down 'In our hurumanu me and my group already started rehearsing for movie'
I did also find this part 'If you guys are wondering who's who in the movie, here are the characters'
you said who's who twice which when you read it, it might not make sence as well. You might need to make the blog post longer so that people enjoy it more.
Who came up with Rapunzel with a twist?