This is a story about my Favourite pair of Shoes and what I think it does when I'm not around.
Fila:
YAY! She's not home!! I'm so excited!. I can finally get out of this closet filled with weird looking shoes.
Air Force:
Umm, Excuse me?! You might have Flowers sewed on you, but we look a bit cooler than you. Plus, I was the favourite until you came.
Fila:
Ummm, Ok?! You WERE the favourite. The OLD favourite. I'm the new favourite here.!
Air Force:
So what if your the new Favourite?! At least she doesn't use me that often and she always clean me. She use you every time and she rarely clean you!
TO BE CONTINUED....
NOT FINISH!
Hi Janel, I did enjoy this first bit of your post about my shoes. I would of liked it more if you added in more writing to it. You also could of added in at the very start what the story is about. Also of you added in more to t because if you have a look on my blog you will see that I have written a lot and you have only written a little bit into it. If you were thinking of what to write about and how to start the story I understand bevause I had trouble with that to. I really hope that you finish the story soon enough so i can finish reading.
ReplyDeleteWhen do you think you will finish this?
Are you going to write up top what the story is about?