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Wednesday, 17 March 2021

The Narrative Matrix - English

For English, we started a new topic called "The Narrative" with a list of matrix or activity that we have to complete but this time, in order. I will be posting all of them here on this blog post. 

The first activity that we did was "Show don't Tell". We got 4 sentences that we had to rewrite. These are the sentences: The building were really tall, Sarah was really upset, She was so happy to see him, and The lake was beautiful. 

Here is the simple presentation I made:







The Narrative Opening:
For the second activity that we had to complete, we had to write 3 - 5 narrative openings. There was also photos provided for us to use it as our topic. Here are the openings I have written:




















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  1. Anonymous19 March 2021 at 14:18

    Great work, Janel! I really like the extra effort you put into the visual presentation of your work. To improve, try to describe the lake and the things which make it beautiful, rather than using the word beautiful. Allow your reader to come to that conclusion on their own. Keep up the terrific mahi!

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